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Jako Poolman posted in the group Portrait Photography
Critique is welcome! Tx
Photographer: @jakkals Model: Fahima Haffejee,
EXIF: 1/125 | 100 | F8 | 85mm, Equipment: Canon R8 | Sigma 70-200 (F2.8 DG OS HSM Sports)
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Thanks! I think the shot already looks better. 🙂
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Jako Poolman
Vice-Principal - BMT College
I am an amateur/enthusiast/hobbyist photographer looking to improve my technique and find my style. Right now, I enjoy all types of photography. I lean more towards the challenge of street photography and enjoy the mix of technicality, composition, and creativity of studio work.
As an educator and Vice-Principal of BMT College, I get to do what I love, by creating opportunities for people to learn and improve their worlds.
I absolutely believe that every one of us has infinite potential, but that our purpose for existence is only a fraction for ourselves and mostly for other people.
Focus on and enjoy the process, the work, the grind. Have fun. The rest will follow.
Have you considered cropping just above the knee to give your subject more impact by making them appear larger? We’d also prefer a softer transition of the backdrop towards the right side. Fortunately, this is an easy fix in Lightroom.